Yay, I found you! Overall you've gotten the tone of the show spot-on. Cragen's voice and Huang's analysis are great and Munch is the consummate professional. The only thing I'm going to pick for are longer chapters, but I'll wait until the last one currently up to prod for that :) I noticed some things in this chapter.

“Yet, but you honestly expect

This is a typeo, right?. Yes with no but? Yet on its own?

tal k to this guy

Typeo.